Yes, I enjoy it
It's alright, kinda blah
No, it just doesn't work out for me...
Infantryman
Halo Fan Comic "Operation WEST" Teaser! (Very Pic Heavy!!)
For those who remember, I released a picture a few months back showing the artwork I was hoping to use in my fan-comic, well I really didn't like that style so after much, much, more work I finally settled on one that I think fits what I had in mind; thus I bring you the teaser for my series entitled "Operation WEST" below! (The writing is a bit choppy in this one, but rest assured that it will improve upon the full scale release for issue #1) Enjoy, and let me know what you think:
Infantryman
pretty good!
btw, could you increase the font size a bit!?
Infantryman
That was great, I can't wait for more!
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Looks great so far, the style is awesome but maybe like markanator said you could up the font a size or two. Other than that it's awesome!
Spartan - 122, " I don't fail. I succeed at finding what doesn't work."
"Pleasure in the job put perfection in the work." -Aristotle, He must've been good at pepping~
Infantryman
Yeah, for sure- I have a rather large monitor so everything is expanded for me haha sorry about that. Glad to hear people like it! I'm hoping to get the actual first issue out sometime this weekend, and then maybe another issue every weekend? I'll let you know once I finish the first!
i like it. its a little grainy in some areas but i like the look of the odst's and other people. i think the background is the only thing that kinda distracts me a bit but other than that its cool.
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Infantryman
Alright all this feedback really helps- I'll try and clean up the style a little bit, but I think the dark/grainy style will ultimately fit the story! I'll try and make the forefront more of the focus, and the text size will be increased for issue #1. Thanks
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e.....ODST need marine to support ?
.i want armor!
Need more pages. I can't form an honest opinion unless there's more to read. I draw comics as a hobby. The art is interesting, even though I can tell it wasn't hand drawn. The panelling is good and easy to follow, which is always a plus for any comic, but especially for action comics.
Here i am.. sitting at the edge of my seat. Not because of excitement.. but because my cat decided to sleep on the other 90%.
>_<;;
Infantryman
Love the art style, it's definitely different. But I really wanna see more of it, like RoxyRoo said.
http://card.mygamercard.net/EDIBLE+HOSH.pngI can only imagine it's trying to rapidly oxidize your soft, fleshy, insides.
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