Fan Film - Operation: Callaghan - Warthog!

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Pre-Production Trailer​












Sample Script V.2​







"Opening Narrative"



1. Camera (>) towards mountains

Camera (^) to cloudy sky

Covenant Cruiser is seen emerging from Slipspace Rupture



2. Camera looks out from trees as a young boy walks by

Camera in front of boy

Camera (^) as boy looks up

Boy begins to cry and screams

Camera looks out from bush as boy runs past



3. Camera is on burning rubble

Camera on burning building

Camera looking up dusty street

Young boy runs down the street

Boy is caught in large explosion

Camera stays focused on the rubble

Camera cuts to boys burnt face

[Fade out]



5. [Fade in]

Camera following 3 marines up the dusty street

Smoldering corpses and rubble

Marine tactical chatter is heard

Marine: "Get Down!"

Banshee bomb hits the street marines go flying



4. Camera (^) behind rubble

Marines are seen taking cover behind sandbag

Sergeant Davis: "We need to get to that hog A.S.A.P! Solmundson give me some cover fire!" {Yelling}

Corporal Solmundson: "On it sir!" {Yelling}

Camera looking down from rooftop at marines

Camera looking down the street at marines

Solmundson rolls from cover and begins firing Assault Rifle

Camera (<) following Solmundson

Follow Cam on Davis

Davis vaults over sandbags towards dead marines and grabs a grenade

Davis blindly throws grenade

Davis: "Lets go Solmundson! Follow me!" {Yelling}

Davis sprints to the other side of the road as grenade explodes

Camera (<) following Davis

Davis runs towards the Warthog

Follow Cam on Davis

Solmundson enters the scene running behind Davis

Davis and Solmundson quickly enter the Warthog

Camera stops short and (>) as Warthog drives away

Camera on rooftop follows Warthog as it heads into the forest



5. Camera from flatbed looking into cab

Solmundson: "What the hell is happening!?" {Yelling/Tears}

Davis: "Its the Covenant... Looks like the dumb bastards finally found Earth..." {Sadness}

Solmundson: "Oh god! Its gonna be like Reach all over again!" {Panic}

Davis: "Pull yourself together marine! Radio out and see if you can locate any survivors!" {Stern}

Solmundson: "I'll try sir." {Trembling}

Radio static

Solmundson: "f*** they're dead! All of them! They're all f***ing dead!" {Panic/Hysterics}

Davis slams fist on steering wheel and curses under breath

Davis: "$#!T..." {Quiet/Anger}

Radio Static

Shane: "This is Private Shane Black! Come in! Corporal Solmundson is that you!? Come in!" {Panic}

Solmundson: "Affirmative Private! Where the hell are you!?" {Relief/Anger}

Shane: "Covies pushed us back to the lake! Their pressing hard. Hurry!" {Panic}

Solmundson: "Were on our way!" {Determined}

Solmundson signals for a u-turn

Camera from side of the trail as Warthog does a u-turn

Camera from flatbed looking into cab

Shane: "Hurry! I don't know how long were gonna last!" {Panic}

Solmundson: "Private Black is Kirk there with you!?" {Stern/Worried}

Radio Static

Shane: "Hurry {Static} they're {Static} coming! {Static}"



6. Camera facing up towards forest from lake shore

Marines taking cover behind rubble

Camera (>)

Marine is grabbed around the neck by an elite and stabbed through the chest

Impaled marines lets out a blood-curdling scream

Marine jumps on the elite's back

Marine: "You f***er!"

Marine stabs the elite in the neck repeatedly

Camera zooms in on the elite

Elite grabs the marine and throws the marine into sandbags

Marine disappears in a cloud of dust

Camera zooms out

Elite walks towards camera

Camera is parallel to the elite and marine

Wounded marine is crawling away firing pistol at the bleeding elite

Camera looking directly at the elite

Elite raises its Energy Sword

Warthog is heard

Elite turns head towards the forest just as the Warthog crashes through the bushes

Warthog heads directly towards the elite

Elite is splattered by the front of the Warthog

Sounds of grunts fleeing​







Sample Storyboard:





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Concept Art:





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Ordinance:





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Warthog:







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Production Team:





Art: FROCKLIFFE



Script: FROCKLIFFE



Storyboard: HARR



Music: *Position Open*



CGI: *Position Reserved*

SFX: *Position Reserved*





UNSC Props:

Weapons: Lord Devious

Armour: Xtreme Tactics

Warthog: Kieren, FROCKLIFFE

Mongoose: *Position Open*



Anything You Can Do To Help: *Position Open*


















*Updated May.25th*
 
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DUDE!! this is epic! you sir are very good at writing. Me, not so much... I would defenately like to see this become a fan film... or at least an animation of some sort. Verry good dude!
 
Yeah my dad is really into film and I just bought myself a 1080i Sony Handicam. So, I'm really gonna make an effort to do this. Armour and covenant costumes are going to be a bit of a problem but, I'm hoping the community will be into helping. The 405th is an amazing community so, I can really see this coming together.



I just updated the script a little and I'm thinking of making a short trailer tonight.
 
FROCKLIFFE said:
Yeah my dad is really into film and I just bought myself a 1080i Sony Handicam. So, I'm really gonna make an effort to do this armour and covenant is going to be a big problem but, I'm hoping the community will be into helping. The 405th is an amazing community so, I can really see this coming together.



I just updated the script a little and I'm thinking of making a short trailer tonight.



That is going to be awesome, once I put together my molds I may send a couple things if it is looking like you are going to do it.
 
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That'd be awesome man! I'll probably be starting this up next school year. The summer will just be making money to go towards the film as well as planning.



The film will be shot in Whistler B.C. and a bit in Vancouver. We hosted this small party thing called the Olympics. So, you may have heard of us :p

If anyone is in the area we could collab on some stuff.



P.S. can anyone find a picture for me? Its of a bunch of marines and a massive hunter. Kind of hard to describe. Its just some really cool fan-art I'd like to find.
 
FROCKLIFFE said:
That'd be awesome man! I'll probably be starting this up next school year. The summer will just be making money to go towards the film as well as planning.



The film will be shot in Whistler B.C. and a bit in Vancouver. We hosted this small party thing called the Olympics. So, you may have heard of us :p

If anyone is in the area we could collab on some stuff.



P.S. can anyone find a picture for me? Its of a bunch of marines and a massive hunter. Kind of hard to describe. Its just some really cool fan-art I'd like to find.



Ive been searching for about 20 minutes now, havent found anything that matches your description but I'll keep looking for a while.
 
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here is what i came up with real quick like...



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sorry if its a bit small... don't realy know why it is... ohh well.
 
HARR that is so sick! Thank you!

How do you feel about becoming the official storyboard artist of the film?!



Anyways I just updated the script again. Everyone make sure to check it out give. Feel free to give advice and some constructive criticism.
 
sound epic dude! lots of dramatic screen directions! Are you planning on filming this, because if you are its going to require alot of props.



Keep up the good work! :)
 
Yeah I'm hoping the 405th community will help with some of the props otherwise it should be all good. Me and my buddy Kieren will be turning his dad's old rally car Jeep into a Warthog so, that will be huge.



Otherwise I built the shotty in woodworking this year so, I'll use that.
 
Big updates check out the new concept art and storyboards! HARR is doing an amazing job!



I really want this to get noticed I could really use some feedback.
 
Your doing a real warthog too???? I thought peter cooper was going to be the only besides ( i think weta has the one from land fall)
 
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