Fanfic Help

[mrdeth0]

So basically I've created a story in the fashion of Word War Z, that I have yet unnamed. i also have a Halo Fanfic that has a name, but I don't know how good it is and think it might need a new one.
The stories are posted in my blog, but I'll post the links here.

Fox Part 1

World War Z project Story 1

World War Z project Story 2

World War Z pproject Story 3

Thats it for now. I just need a good name for the WWZ one that is untaken. Please and thank you for help and feedback.

 

[godsarmor]

omg its horrible lol kidding youre writing resembles William c Dietz writing its really good

 

[mrdeth0]

Really? I'll I've ever read by him is the Flood.

 

[box o crayons]

haha the girl starts to playfully nibble on her arm bravo bravo you deserve a :tutu: creapy guy dancing

 

[mrdeth0]

She's not a zombie, by the way.

 

[godsarmor]

She's not a zombie, by the way.

so its even creepier :tutu:

 

[box o crayons]

why yes it is you deserve some more creepy guys for suspence :tutu: :tutu: :tutu: :tutu: :tutu: :tutu:

 

[mrdeth0]

Thats Jim Carrey.
And it doesnt really help me, but I admire your uh, admiration?

 

[mrdeth0]

I already had one title, Dead Lore, but I don't really like it that much. When it comes to names, my creative juices just dont flow. In my opinion, they suck when compared to real life authors.

 

[mrdeth0]

(Sorry for the triple post) It seems I ran into another predicament with the Halo story. Did the Spartan candidates have their tags (SPARTAN-123 etc.) As soon as they were conscripted or was that afterward? Also, Should I have it from the very beginning, like Fall of Reach, where it documents every little training detail or should I just have bits of that where it shows how the specific Spartan gains interest by superior officers? Feedback, please.