How Would You Rate This Montage Intro?

[Leadingspartan]

I did part of this and my video editor did the other. Tell me what you think. This includes the introduction. Oh, and if it helps it's a sniper montage titled "Vendetta."

 

[Darkslitter]

It looks like 2 seperate intros. The staticy green doesn't go well with the lightning. Other than that the effects themselve are fine.

 

[Leadingspartan]

It looks like 2 seperate intros. The staticy green doesn't go well with the lightning. Other than that the effects themselve are fine.

Yeah, Ithica wants me to make him an intro.

 

[Ithica]

Oh yeah...it would be awesome of you. Thank you very much.

Ithica

 

[Enrisan]

pretty good except the LeadingSpartan title goes on a little too long. Too many different effects for one title.
I've seen the lightning title effect before, can't remember where though.

 

[DreadMullet]

i like the beginning part... could be shorter. also i would take out the title that says "montage" its unneeded. and last thing if you are going to put a quote in there put who said it...even if you saw it on a commercial, internet, or anything else.

 

[BlindRascal]

although its been said, the lightning is meh, stick to the all green style. (and the blue vendetta halo snazziness).


Also, I'm not sure how I feel about the quote. :\


overall though, I liked it. but obviously add some rocking music. or something not rocking, then lead into rocking. lol.

 

[Leadingspartan]

Thanks for the feedback, I'm also starting an HLG type machinima soon. I'll post that when it's done.