Hey every body one of my friends and I just started our own clan dose any body want to join here is the to the site.
My clan
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S1l3nt V1p3r
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Very poor presentation.
I say no.
I say no.
GruntOfAction
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First of all correct spelling is a plus..I don't think Does is Dose. Second a freewebs site isn't the best for a clan...Feels more like a fort you'd make under a table in your living room when your 6 years old..
ODST General
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S1l3nt V1p3r said:
didn't see the name, only the emblem, and knew it was you Viper
as for better representation, besides better spelling, and a better site if you can get one, say some positive points about your clan
(don't offer high positions to people to get them to join)
say to some extent how the clan is structured with ranks, and groups or such within it
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THANK YOU!!!!!!
List of ranks, um I manage the forums not the site was just told to put a link to the site so that is what I did If you want all of the info send an email to kevin (Scyyth on the forums) and HE will fill you in not my job not my problem.
Requirements
1 Be nice.
2 Be a good sport.
3 Have at least one of the games on the list or convince us to add another.
4 Join the forums
5 have XBOX LIVE or other on line service.
List of ranks, um I manage the forums not the site was just told to put a link to the site so that is what I did If you want all of the info send an email to kevin (Scyyth on the forums) and HE will fill you in not my job not my problem.
Requirements
1 Be nice.
2 Be a good sport.
3 Have at least one of the games on the list or convince us to add another.
4 Join the forums
5 have XBOX LIVE or other on line service.
WheresDaChief
Active Member
I'm already in a clan sorry
So? I still need advice on how to present my clan.
hmmm let me give an example of what you just did:
Your very best friend comes up to you shortly after you get married and says "Hey dude I want to ask my girl friend to marry me, any advice on what I should say?" and you say "Sorry I'm all ready married"
wile not the best example in the world I it gets my point across.
hmmm let me give an example of what you just did:
Your very best friend comes up to you shortly after you get married and says "Hey dude I want to ask my girl friend to marry me, any advice on what I should say?" and you say "Sorry I'm all ready married"
wile not the best example in the world I it gets my point across.
WheresDaChief
Active Member
hellclown said:
I was merely responding your OP asking if anyone wanted to join your clan.
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gamerguy55
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Umm, you could be a little less arrogant, he was just trying to tell you that he couldn't join your clan. No where in your original post did you ask for help to run it.hellclown said:
It's fine that you want help, just please don't complain to people about them not helping...when you didn't even ask for it in the first place.
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WHEN THE FREEK DID I ask for help to run it I've been asking for help on how to present it not run it and Please Please don't tell me if you can't jin orr that you already have a clan I COULD CARE LESS if you already have one ALL I WANT TO KNOW IS HOE TO PRESENT MY CLAN BETTER!!!!!!!!
gamerguy55
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Please, calm down. I'm sorry if i offended you, what I meant was that you didn't ask for help in your first post. Jaxjags2100 was just trying to be courteous and tell you that he couldn't join your clan. He was just trying to be nice and inform you that he was unable to join.hellclown said:
Since you want to know how to present your clan you might want to work on spelling, freak not FREEK, join not jin, how not HOE (at least i don't think you really meant that
). You may also want to work on the way you refer to your clan, instead of saying "we" you might want to say "The Dark Eclipse". One last thing, when you say things like
you might want to day "If you are interested in joining" or "If you would like to join". There just little things, but they can make a huge difference in the way the public perceives your clan, making these small changes will make your clan seem more serious and mature. You might want to invest in an actual web address to make it seem like you mean business. Hope that helps.
P.S. Using capital letters is considered yelling, so if you don't want to seen like a 3 year old throwing a temper tantrum, please even if you mad, try to reply in a sensible way.
P.P.S. I'm in a clan and therefore unable to join, sorry.
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Its called constructive criticism, it helps you, and isnt supposed to put you down. But you are taking it the wrong way and being ill-mannered. It isnt needed and if you are just here to try to recruit for your clan we really dont need you as a member, if you would like people to be interested in your clan, tell us about it, people wont join just because you were bored and you thought you could find a Halo website to go recruit on. Give us some information and that is how to present yourself. If you are in the 405th because you would like to be part of the armor community great! But this wasnt the way to say hello.hellclown said:
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