Samus comic

AgentBootyPants

New Member
Looks good. Just need someone to proof-read your writing, fix up the grammar a bit, and tone down the noise, as Vader said, in some of the cells.

Also, it's not Samous, it's Samus :)

Oh, and punctuation is a beautiful thing. Helps with those dramatic pauses.

"It's...it's John's gun..."
 
AgentBootyPants said:
Looks good. Just need someone to proof-read your writing, fix up the grammar a bit, and tone down the noise, as Vader said, in some of the cells.

Also, it's not Samous, it's Samus :)

Oh, and punctuation is a beautiful thing. Helps with those dramatic pauses.

"It's...it's John's gun..."

I know, but i spelled samous like that on purpose
 
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thanx it would be cool if we could add our own or custom sound effects in the game. like when the ar shoots u hear someone making the sound effects with their mouth
 
Dedrick said:
Sweet man very nice :D Can't wait until you come out with the rest.
thanx and if u want to see the pages in between, go to leading spartan's comic tryout thread
 
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smilie120

Sr Member
"samous must be destroyed" DUN DUN DUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!! :lol: Awsome comic man cant wait to see the final showdown :ninja:
 
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