the flight battle is to much like the battle at the start of star wars episode 3, the weapons aboard the craft seem way to powerful for something from the halo-vers in that small a package. all in all though it was cool to see more faces of the Spartans even of Kelly, a more important spartan in the stories.
i liked the helm Kelly was wearing, looks like there's some good front and side shots in there, maybe its enough to make it. hell, i would love to look into modeling most of the suits, but that's still only thought right now. also if you noticed, Kelly was wearing a female specific armor, i know legends isn't canon but its close.
the best one yet
PS: the elites eyes are just wrong, even the duel got that right.
Edit: wait, The unsc doesn't have a real cloaking capabilities on there ships...