A Courting Gift

[rhaiyszkie]

A picture will say a thousand words to the girl you love. there is no word that describe what im feeling right now so i decided to draw it...

With some flowers and a romantic letter for the most important one of my life. but im just recently courting her. Tell me what you think guys, shall i have her yes on this?

 

[smilie120]

Well, here's some critique.



Firstly you might want to post you references so we actually have an idea what were supposed to be looking at.

The drawing doesn't really speak to me it has no values, try boosting the contrast and use darker shading in places.

Hold the portrait in front of a mirror it will be easier to spot the inaccuracies.

And finally some of the proportions seem a little bit off.



But all in all it's coming along very nicely.