[405Th Novel] Spartans Never Die...

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Shade said:
Robert 088 is gonna die? :cry:

Ah no none of the main characters have died yet. You don't need to worry. That won't happen till around chapters five - ten.
 
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SPARTAN II said:
"Send me out... with a bang" then :D


I have yet maybe a better idea from death. Like somebody said before, since you ask SpartanSRS, maybe we can put in the story that you get promoted into a spartan. Or you can become leader of all ODSt's? those are just my ideas
 
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Just to let you guys know. A petty officer is a Navel officer(not army). And if you guys need help with the machinima i can help with editing, acting, and voice.
 
SpartanSRS said:
Well, I never incorporated myself into the story. But since no one was taking Admiral, I changed it to be myself. Parse... hmm, You won't die to quick. Everyone in this story will die in some kind of extraordinary fashion. And... Chapter 3 is at least halfway done.

Are you seriously gonna knock off ALL personnel? I thought you were going to let some live.
 
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Texan2012 said:
Are you seriously gonna knock off ALL personnel? I thought you were going to let some live.

Ahaha nooooo, That's not what I meant yes I meant some will live. Just a couple will die in some extraordinary fashion. :whistle:
 
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ODST lutenant (wrong spelling XD)

can i die throwing myself in front of a sticky nade and jump away saving an admiral/AI/spartan? that would be epic but hey- your story your shots i just want to be ODST/marine



P.S maybe you could wright a script for me? i am making TONS of armor right now for a short halo series set before the covanant attack about 3 ODSTS (with assorted marines) fighting rebels in the core worlds sorry about the tangent but your a good wrighter (again spelled wrong :p ) have a kitty
 
charles said:
ODST lutenant (wrong spelling XD)

can i die throwing myself in front of a sticky nade and jump away saving an admiral/AI/spartan? that would be epic but hey- your story your shots i just want to be ODST/marine
P.S maybe you could wright a script for me? i am making TONS of armor right now for a short halo series set before the covanant attack about 3 ODSTS (with assorted marines) fighting rebels in the core worlds sorry about the tangent but your a good wrighter (again spelled wrong :p ) have a kitty

Haha thanks! I'll think about writing a script, but right now I'm focusing on this novel :]
 
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WarHead9705 said:
Just to let you guys know. A petty officer is a Navel officer(not army). And if you guys need help with the machinima i can help with editing, acting, and voice.


Thanks for the offer. Actually everybody who has a role in the Machinima I'm cresting based on SRS's novel. everybody will say there part. I'm going to edit. Everybody is going to act and use their voice, people who don't have gamertags, i will imprevise. Your part is moving your character on your roles, and talking. :D


charles said:
ODST lutenant (wrong spelling XD)

can i die throwing myself in front of a sticky nade and jump away saving an admiral/AI/spartan? that would be epic but hey- your story your shots i just want to be ODST/marine
P.S maybe you could wright a script for me? i am making TONS of armor right now for a short halo series set before the covanant attack about 3 ODSTS (with assorted marines) fighting rebels in the core worlds sorry about the tangent but your a good wrighter (again spelled wrong :p ) have a kitty

Lol you're just trying to get known in the novel by saving an important person. lol, yeah everybody wants to be something big in this novel of SRS's, it kinda ticks me off, but everybody wants to be known for something.

Now i'm getting kinda ticked off, SpartanSRS might not be, but I'm kinda. this may help SpartanSRS keep things in order. No offence to anyone. There are some many Liuetanants and Sergeant in the ODst's and Marines, which is wierd, i know SRS let you choose your rank, but most of us chose something big to be something big. Like a lieutanant. If you're a lieutenant or a sergeant. you're going to need a squad, but, we don't have much private of coporals. So what i think SRS should do is gather random Marines or ODST and declare one person the leader of each group, or have a Spartan be leader of that group on special misions. idk, it just is hard for me to group delta squads and stuff together if everybody is a sergeant or up and needs a squad when we only have like.. 2 corporals in each Marines and ODST.
 
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TheSpartanMjolnir said:
I have yet maybe a better idea from death. Like somebody said before, since you ask SpartanSRS, maybe we can put in the story that you get promoted into a spartan. Or you can become leader of all ODSt's? those are just my ideas

Well, as kewl as that would be, I would imagine that would require my character to be out of the main storyline for a bit, while he goes to get the SPARTAN augmentations done (which he may, or may not, survive from; the casualty rate during augmentation was pretty high). Thanks for the idea, though. Besides, I don't want to complicate SRS's plot too much, so it's probably easier just to keep my character as a Marine Sergeant. Which is still kewl, imho.
 
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well its me, i was going to do the squad pics. but its kinda hard to get all the spartan tags up( i.e. saprtan 302 james ald.)
i was wondering if you could round up the numbers. thnz


never mind found them.... :p they were in a earlyer post....sorry. :p :p :p

ok i gess you guys want to get the squads all set up by your self...and dont want me to randomly do the squads by my self. i might get them all messed up and f*** the story so, you set them up and give my the info k. (gramer sound all werid to me...)

....ok me and spaz47 have eod full suits. do you want me to tweek the color of the armors for us. like make spat. 302 dark dark green
then spart. 047 dark green. with the servis tagd and the squads get up me the colors...sorry to be a pain but i just want this to look good for the book.




(edited like 5 times in the last 12 min.'s....oyyy...)
 
Well, I might make seperate squads but people will appear here and there, they will grow more important as the story goes on... I'll post a dossier for you animemann of the Spartans and everyone from SpartanMjolnir's earlier post.


TheSpartanMjolnir said:
Let me get this straight

Spartans are:

TheSpartanMjolnir: Spartan 151 hayabusa - Major/Commander Nicholas

Ithica: Spartan 149 Rogue? -General Dave?

Spaz47: Spartan 047

Macattack: Spartan 064 MrkVi body Mrk V helmet

Animaman: Spartan 302 EOD - Major grade 3 James

Th3 Fett Man:Spartan 155 Armor Mix between TheSpartanMojlnir and Ithica -Lieutenant grade 1 Quinn

jppompers: Spartan H99 Security Shoulders Eod helmet -Colonel Grade 1 Pompers

SpartanSRS: Spartan 001 Recon!!!!

Jedi Theron: Spartan 1969 Security ( If you want) Captain grade 2 Grey

Shade: Spartan G3R EOD
All slots for SPARTANS are CLOSED SPARTANS, SALUTE!
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ODST'S are:

1 shot kill: ODST Weapon: Color: - Captain Jakson

MarneusCal: ODST Weapon: Color: - Lieutenant Grade 3 Slinger, Kyle

thepuma: ODST Weapon: Color:

Achille: ODST Weapon: Color - Private Pomeroy Brandon

Spartan-299: ODST Weapon: Color: -Lieutenant Jacob

HaloFreakX: ODST Weapon: Color: - Commander Rik

MisterChief: ODST Private Weapon: Special Grenade AR shotgun Color: Black w/ silver highlights - Private Dylans

ACDcrokr209: ODST Gunnery Sergeant Weapon: Color: - Gunnery Sergeant grade 2 Rojas,Fransico ( you really want to be an ODST)

xxFemaleSpacexx: ODST Weapon: Color:

Spartan1234: ODST Weapon: Spartan Laser Color: -Gunnery Sergeant Roberts

Shellshocker: ODST Petty Officer Second Class Weapon:BR and Shotgun Color:
5 slots for ODST left.
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Marines Are:

Chupathingy: Marine: Corporal Jack Ryan .Private, sergeant ( Choose if you will be in a squad or leader of a squad, we need swuad members too not just sergeants) weapon: catch Phrase:

Spartan117x: Marine: Private ( woooooo) Weapon: Catch Phrase: -Private Bonus,Jon

SpartanII: Marine: Chief Of his own squad Weapon: Catch Phrase: THIS IS SPARTA ( LOL, if you want that to be it) 0 Chief Petty Officer Blackwell,Eric

Count Vilanova: Marine: Sergeant crew of Robert Owens Weapon: Catch Phrase: -Crew Chief Vilanova,Gabrie

Syphon: Marine: Private Weapon: Catch Phrase:

Warhead: Marine Gunerry Sergent Weapon: AR baby Catch Phrase: -Gunnery Sergent Grade 1 Tierney Hoffmen,John
Lots of Slots open feel free to join ( If you don't have a spot already)
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Pelican Pilots:

Syphon: Marine And Pilot Weapon of defense: Pelican's Name: - Captain Grade 1 Samuel

Bigalt424: Pilot Wepon of defense ( WOD):Two wielded Magnums Pelican's name: - Captain grade 3 Alex

Texan2012: Pilot WOD: Pelican's name ( carries marines and Spartans): - First Lieutenant Owens

Lots of Slots open for more pilots ( Same rule as MArines to join) Takenote that Spartans Can drive their own Pelican's themselves but there is one specific best liscensed spartan
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UNSC Control ( Lieutenit, Commander, Majors, E.T.C):

( Adam or a MOD should be the admiral): Admiral Likes: His wife on earth Controls: The whole ship

Nugget: AI Likes: Controls: Computers of ship

xxFemaleSpartanxx: Captain Ela-Beth Likes Controls:

Chupathingy:Captain Ryan Likes: Controls:

thepuma: Captain Amup Likes: Controls:

adventSpartanMatrix: Major A'vent M'atri Likes: Controls:

Texan 2012: Lieutinet Owens Likes: Controls: Pelican

Spartan II: Sergeant Blackwell Likes: Controls:

Count Vilanov: Sergeant Vilanova Likes: Controls:

SprayNoob: Lieutenant Willams,Ralph Likes Controls: UNSC secret Navy base underwater. Where scientist train spartans sometimes

And that's it. Slots are not open, and SpartanSRS if i missed somebody send me a p.m of the people i missed

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Covenant Species ( on our side):

ArgetArduna: The Legendary Arbiter the 19th Eats: Good at: Weapon:Energy sword - Arbiter Areg 'Adurn

mynameisunknown: Elite Eats: Good at: weapon: - name is unknown

Spartan129: Elite Eats: good at: Weapon: - Honor Guard Sangheili ( found name and position on halo wiki)

Shipmaster: Fleet Commander Eats: good at: Weapon: Beam Rifle - Fleet Commander Vadum, Shiva

That's all the Covenant I found. P.m If i missed anybody that's a covenant. Slots are open.
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WOOOOOOO :lol: I'm finally done with this. This took me a lot of research and time. I hope this really helps everyone(especially SpartanSRS) no who they are in the story, The slots that are close are close so pay attention to that.

Thanks you everybody for keeping their rank and occupation organized. Thank you SpartanSRS for giving us an oppurtunity to be in a novel. This is lots of fun. Again, these are everybody jobs in the story. If you want to change it contact me and SpartanSRS

Thanks again,

TheSpartanMjolnir: Nicholas : Hayabusa ( In story)

This is the list for animemann reposted.
 
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SpartanSRS said:
Well, I might make seperate squads but people will appear here and there, they will grow more important as the story goes on... I'll post a dossier for you animemann of the Spartans and everyone from SpartanMjolnir's earlier post.
This is the list for animemann reposted.
yaa i noticed that but ...read my edits....it will explan my resoning for that..
 
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Likes: Flight, study, control

Thought I should go ahead and say a few of my likes. If there's anything you need me to tell you, just go ahead and ask. :)
 
SpartanII: Marine: Chief Of his own squad Weapon: Catch Phrase: THIS IS SPARTA ( LOL, if you want that to be it) 0 Chief Petty Officer Blackwell,Eric
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Spartan II: Sergeant Blackwell Likes: Controls:

@ SRS: Weapon would be SRS99D-SR. Catch phrase... I'll have to think about that one, lol. Same with my character's likes. What do you mean by "controls", though?
 
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SPARTAN II said:
@ SRS: Weapon would be SRS99D-SR. Catch phrase... I'll have to think about that one, lol. Same with my character's likes. What do you mean by "controls", though?


What part of the ship you control. the station, like guards the armory.

animemannn said:
well its me, i was going to do the squad pics. but its kinda hard to get all the spartan tags up( i.e. saprtan 302 james ald.)
i was wondering if you could round up the numbers. thnz
never mind found them.... :p they were in a earlyer post....sorry. :p :p :p

ok i gess you guys want to get the squads all set up by your self...and dont want me to randomly do the squads by my self. i might get them all messed up and f*** the story so, you set them up and give my the info k. (gramer sound all werid to me...)

....ok me and spaz47 have eod full suits. do you want me to tweek the color of the armors for us. like make spat. 302 dark dark green
then spart. 047 dark green. with the servis tagd and the squads get up me the colors...sorry to be a pain but i just want this to look good for the book.
(edited like 5 times in the last 12 min.'s....oyyy...)

Since we have 9 Spartans, we will have 3 groups of 3.

Squad _________ ( name of squad): Major Nicholas, General Dave,Major James
Squad__________:

I'll finish the edit soon,, i got to get some rest.
 
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SpartanSRS said:
Just a couple will die in some extraordinary fashion. :whistle:

Like mine, I hope! If you need any help with thinking up extraordinary deaths, I've got quite an imagination for that. Just ask if you'd like some ideas tossed around.
 
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