405th Role Play 2 Crit

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Oh wow... um 20 years? Well... I will need to revise my character alot... but I can't right now. So I might not be in this RP at all. Well, actually it depends... so I'll update Alex in a bit. I have read the past 2 RPs and I must say they are sweet. One of the best RPs I've come across. So I'll be back soon, and maybe learn a bit of Auto CAD @ school. :lol:

*Edit: Sorry dude, I didn't realize that my character sounded like yours
 
Wow. Twenty years. Thats a fair bit more than what I was expecting, but it accounts for the Human-Elite allaince, and all the extra research thats been going on.
 
Hey guys,
Spartan 137, sorry about not posting lately, school took over my life pretty fast. Anyway, it is seeming to ease up a bit and I should be able to write a post tomorrow after my visit to MIT (yeah ... I know).

- Adulese
 
well really in critpo sleep its only like 10 years of age to anybody. and one little question where is our mission on the planet were raiding because i have like 5 pages front and back wrighten but i need more info on our mission like, what are we attacking ( fuel depot or something like that) because i wrote us attacking a fuel depot and with those 5 pages im only in the first 45 minutes of the battle! so far all my friends are amazed by it.
 
Wow. Did these new Posts happen because of me Posting today? Anyway, I thought I'd let you know that My character, Mark-107, will have some Flashbacks.....

Stay Tuned! ;)
 
Fenix Chief said:
Wow. Did these new Posts happen because of me Posting today? Anyway, I thought I'd let you know that My character, Mark-107, will have some Flashbacks.....

Stay Tuned! ;)
can't wait for them :D
 
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Name: Dr. Gabriel Grant

Age: 35

Rank: UNSC physician (Captain)

Appearance: Short length thick brown hair just down to middle of forehead, green\brown deep set eyes, just over five foot six, muscular fit build (Gymnast type) but by no means in peak physical condition, tanned light skin and a square jaw. Very thin titanium band on left ring finger.

Armor Classification: No armor

Specaility: Medical and Logic

Main Weapons of Choice: (No weapons training past boot, only weapon with any proficiency M6 pistol)

Bio: Growing up on Earth Gabriel wanted to be just like every other boy since the dawn of civilization, a warrior. Gabriel grew up in his youth wanting to be a marine, then a ODST, and finally settled on wanting to be a longsword pilot when he hit his mid teens. The desire to fight only grew greater when the covenant attacked earth this only instilled more that desire to serve a greater cause.
Gabriel joined the UNSC as soon as he was able when he turned 18. Gabriel had to very useful genetic advantages on his side as well that he thought would make him a shoe in for the flight program and later on a commander. Gabriel has an extremely efficient immune system, bones heal twice as fast, sicknesses overcome as well, toxins (Alcohol) having no lasting effect in normal quantities. Several tests were run on Gabriel to find out why, and no answer could be found other than the fact that it just is; no noticeable difference in leukocytes compared to other humans, no abnormal pulse rate, normal performing mitochondria, and normal blood workup. The other advantage Gabriel has is he is quick, very quick mentally. Perhaps derived from his level of intelligence or what ever factor lead him to that, but before most even have time to think of the problem Gabriel has got three answers and\or made a very poignant point in retort; mentally he’s fast anyways, just because his brain knows what is going on or what he sees doesn’t mean he can make his body move any faster than anyone else.
During the aptitude tests though he scored far from what they wanted for pilots. Gabriel’s intelligence score put him in a large range of trainable skills, but even more it was his psychological evaluation that put him out of any possible combat or command cast; he tested with a high proclivity to not follow the chain of command, not having a willingness to sacrifice himself or fellow soldiers, and an unwillingness to play by the book if he thought he had a better idea.
So to his disappointment at first the UNSC put Gabriel in the medical training program where he graduated 3rd in the overall graduating class for that year and has worked on wounded brethren since.

Current Assignment: UNSC Conqueror- Carrier
 
I'm not 100% as to how the UNSC treats specialist, I am more basing it on what I know (Which is limited) about the air force. I think the rank is just doctor, since they\(We) don't command troops, give orders, ect but at the same time aren't subjected in the same way to the orders of others just because they are of a certain rank I.E. lieutenant being able to order a doc around just because of rank.

I don't really care, I entirely deffer to what would be best for the role play and If I do need a rank though whatever would be reasonable for a 17 year in the service USNC "Officer"
 
hopefully no one posted a commenced attack, on planet side for a few reasons,

the name of the planet

the fact that we need to slipspace there

and that its surround by orbital platforms and sentry frigates

but now that i have power back we can continue quickly
 
well since were having a space fight ill make up some characters for me or anyone else to play as,
CARRIER- yorktown- cpt. evans ship brakes formation to protect the other ships and gets blasted by salvos in this spase fight.
FRIGATE-gardian angle- cpt. louis
FRIGATE-northern star- cpt. macoy
PROWLER- lone wolf- cpt. adams, (sisters with the silent wolf)
PROWLER-silent wolf- cpt. jenkins, (sisters with the lone wolf)
 
Assassin716 said:
hopefully no one posted a commenced attack, on planet side for a few reasons,

the name of the planet

the fact that we need to slipspace there

and that its surround by orbital platforms and sentry frigates

but now that i have power back we can continue quickly
I'd be happy to use the Loyalists Squids from My Side of the story for the attack, but Id like to actually finish up some parts.
 
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LastSpartan said:
I'd like to play more this time. Can anyone send me like a small summary of what's going on at the moment by pm please?
We're sorta debating over if we do declare an attack on a Race and it's Planet. I'd like to volunteer my enemy on my side of the story, The Squids. Now onto the actual RP, not the Crit. Right now My character is held captive by the Loyalist Squids. Last Time I read, Noobcrusha is Doing a squad of ODST's I believe, all the rest, I dunno. If The Loyalist Squids do get Picked up as the Attacked Race, I'd first Like to finish The Battle of the UNSC Hellbringer and some Other Parts.
 
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