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[405Th Novel] Spartans Never Die...

Discussion in 'New Recruits' started by SpartanSRS, Apr 23, 2009.


What do you think of this novel so far?

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  1. ACDCrockr209


    Huh, I thought that you guys were done doing this. Glad to see that its still being written.

    -Pony (y) (y) (y)
  2. SpartanSRS

    SpartanSRS Member

    Ah it was never done! I just got lazy eventually... :D
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  3. Syphon

    Syphon Member

    hell yes, awesome addition, and i gotta agree, you should definitely try to get this published, the imagery and story are just amazing (trust meh, ive read a lot of john ringo books) i think you have a great chance of being published with this
  4. baddog9000

    baddog9000 Member

    Rank: Major Grade 2

    Gender: Male

    Armor: Mark 5

    Occupation: Your story you chose long as I don't get pwned.

    Weapon of Chose: BR55 and Pistol.
  5. SpartanSRS

    SpartanSRS Member

    Sorry.. registration into the story has been closed for awhile :(, THOUGH THERE IS A CHANCE random people will appear from the long list of people that didn't get in.. but mostly in those small skirmishes. :p
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  6. salival462

    salival462 Jr Member

    I would really like to be an addition to this!!
  7. Wow, after 2 months of not being on the forums. You only got a paragraph and a sentence :p LOl


    Sorry but regirastration are closed. If people just keep on joining, then everything will not be on track for SpartanSRS. So, he might give you a tiny rolll. But please just say that want to have a little roll, don't give out something like this anymore:

    Uhh, i really want to be in this book. So let me

    Rank: General ( the highestlevel)

    Name: Ron Walkerman


    Armor: Flaming hayabusa

    Bio: Ron is a Spartan general who is the best out of all the lame spartans here. He took out 20 covenant spieces in 3 mins.
    So , please don't do anymore forms. And try not to get greedy with a role

    Oh yeah and forgot. I was only going to be here for today to see how things are going. Bye
  8. SpartanSRS

    SpartanSRS Member

    Hahaha yeah, but over the summer there'll be tons more chapters. Now that school and finals are over I can really work on this now ;)
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  9. SRS, you need to add some, umm what you ma call it, well you need a little more off topic dialogue. Because basicly, your story is about 10 years after the covenant. No offense, but then wouldn't people just play Halo 4 ( if there is one). Just saying that everbody needs some more emotion and talking than just them trying to stop the black sun
  10. SpartanSRS

    SpartanSRS Member

    Yeah, I'm kind of trying to add more off topic dialogue, but I'm more of a serious writer so it makes it harder for me to add dialogue that's off topic from what's happening around them. I'll go back through the previous chapters and add more dialogue that pertains to the soldiers' pasts etc.
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  11. Don't sweat it man, you got enough eyes looking this over it should be pretty polished off by the time your done with it.

    Did you even close registration on the Marines? wow, I woulda sworn you couldn't fill all 150 spots of that! Makes me glad I got involved early...........

    Looking good! Thank God schools over neh?

    EDIT: I'm also noticing we have significantly more officers volunteering than enlisted, and any military person will tell you that is a BAD thing. we need more privates!
  12. SpartanSRS

    SpartanSRS Member

    I closed it early because the sheer amount of character would probably overwhelm me :\, but I might take a look from people who offered after registration closed and put them into the marine slots.
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  13. PunisherX

    PunisherX Jr Member

    My arbiter name is phantom
  14. SpartanSRS

    SpartanSRS Member

    That's cool, but wouldn't it be more self explanatory if we just left his name as the Arbiter?
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  15. SpartanSRS

    SpartanSRS Member

    Sorry for the double post, but the story has been updated for your viewing pleasure. Enjoy!
  16. Texan2012

    Texan2012 Member

    I know I have not looked at this for a while, but it is pretty good. I noticed to that you failed note that I have a crew chief in my bird on the first page (you accidentaly left him out completly from the roster).

    looking forward the next update.
  17. SpartanSRS

    SpartanSRS Member

    It's getting harder to scan through the pages of the post to get everything right XD, I'll try to fix that soon though.
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  18. SpartanSRS

    SpartanSRS Member

    What kind of last name would you like to have, it makes it easier to insert ranks etc. during the story.
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  19. animemannn

    animemannn Member

  20. Syphon

    Syphon Member

    :lol: IT LIVES :lol:

    awesome job on the update, really lovin it

    Urban, its the last name my Irish ancestors had before it was misspelled in a US Census. :cautious:
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  21. SpartanSRS

    SpartanSRS Member

    Haha ok then, you'll show up soon in Chapter 6 I can be sure of that ;)
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  22. animemannn

    animemannn Member

    wait....i got to start back up and the art.
    al get on it in the morning...
  23. SpartanSRS

    SpartanSRS Member

    Good to hear! :lol: Few people have checked up on the story since registration has closed..
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  24. ACDCrockr209


    When is Pony going to be killing some covies??

    -Pony (y) (y) (y)
  25. SpartanSRS

    SpartanSRS Member

    I'll give you a hint. :). A squad of elite ODSTs are heading towards the planet Alpha to clear out the sector. You're open to use a flame thrower if you want. :lol:
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