405th Rp Critique

[SGT Razor]

Whoa, whoa, whoa. My character can be in two places at once?! That could've come in handy earlier in the story. How can he be on the Incarnate and the Sovereign at the same time? Are you guys even reading my posts?

 

[Assassin716]

Whoa, whoa, whoa. My character can be in two places at once?! That could've come in handy earlier in the story. How can he be on the Incarnate and the Sovereign at the same time? Are you guys even reading my posts?

Spartan 137 it would be better to discharge Friendly's character so he can write the part of UNSC Sovereign coming out of slipspace and meeting up at the debreifing, im fine with my character.

 

[Spartan137]

Oh, $#!T. Sorry, thought you where on the Incarnate.

Gimme a few minutes. I gotta make the change.

EDIT: Okay, problem changed. We shall be awaiting you in the chamber. Man, trying to keep all the names and locations straight is getting harder!

 

[BlacRoseImmortal]

Holy Moley! I cant wait to see what happens next! That last post got me all wide eyed and sitting on the edge of my seat lol.

 

[Assassin716]

wait which last post? the one i made or what

and yes i believe a few more posts and this RP will finally close

also for those of you that i was chatting before if you can message me
i cant exactly remember the planets name we will be involved in the next one

 

[Spartan137]

wait which last post? the one i made or what

and yes i believe a few more posts and this RP will finally close

also for those of you that i was chatting before if you can message me
i cant exactly remember the planets name we will be involved in the next one

What? Something happend?

And if you can't remember the name, I certainly don't!

 

[Assassin716]

no i was replying to what blacrose had posted, but no im pretty sure i found the right name in my document files

 

[Spartan137]

no i was replying to what blacrose had posted, but no im pretty sure i found the right name in my document files

Whew... that's good.

 

[Adulese]

Has anyone noticed that someone posted a .... weird and out of place post in the RP thread. Just wanted you to know.

- Adulese

 

[Spartan137]

Has anyone noticed that someone posted a .... weird and out of place post in the RP thread. Just wanted you to know.

- Adulese

You catch on quickly .

Already sent a PM.

 

[Adulese]

Yeah, I read it. He seems to be a decent writer, so maybe when the next one starts up he could be a good addition.

 

[Assassin716]

Waiting on Leegrisham, after he posts if you guys want to add something to the debriefing go ahead dont be discouraged

 

[leegrisham]

HE HE sorry guys I don't really keep up with this on the weekends. I just posted...

So is the first RP done now?

 

[Assassin716]

alright guys im done, finish up with your last posts and ill start up a RP 2 Concept thread

 

[Adulese]

Sweet. Nice job on the last post Assassin. I think it ended things rather nicely.

- Adulese

 

[BlacRoseImmortal]

I agree, that was a good ending to your part. I cant wait for the next one to start!

 

[Assassin716]

thanks guys, i dont like to always focus on fighting and fatigue, sometimes a good love side story makes things sweeter


just like contact harvest

 

[Dreadnought]

So RP2 is starting soon?

 

[Assassin716]

yeah im going to wait for the guys to finish as they wanted too add some stuff before it closes.

ill be starting a topic tomorrow for 405th 2nd RP concept

 

[Dreadnought]

w00t