405th Rp Critique

[Assassin716]

Thank God I have internet again.

anyways be careful leegrisham we havn't nailed down where we are exactly starting. so be ready just incase to change things.

 

[leegrisham]

You know I hadn't even thought about the memorial service but thats a good idea, *begins revising his draft*
don't worry Assassin the post is pretty location/plot neutral or it wont really affect anyone else either way..

 

[Spartan137]

C'mon! I wanna start the next RP!

 

[Assassin716]

sry bout that everyone work has been brutal, just got off work (night shift) so ill post my part now, as i have finally relaxed.

let the stories ending become the beginning


(alright i posted, but its still not the ending, ill post again in the morning.)

 

[SGT Razor]

It's no big deal, but this is really bothering me. I don't know what it says in the H3 booklet or the novels, but in the H2 booklet it says that Master Chief weighs about 1000 pounds while in his armor. One ton is 2000 pounds. Either MC was really skinny, or someone doesn't have their facts straight.

 

[Spartan137]

It's no big deal, but this is really bothering me. I don't know what it says in the H3 booklet or the novels, but in the H2 booklet it says that Master Chief weighs about 1000 pounds while in his armor. One ton is 2000 pounds. Either MC was really skinny, or someone doesn't have their facts straight.

Huh. I was under the impression that it was 1000lbs. I remember something saying that he weighed around 300-400 lbs, and that would make the armor something around 600-700lbs...

Inch thick Titanium grade-A armor, fusion core...

I would personally guess at around 1500 total, but I could see 1 ton...

EDIT: Yeah, Wikipedia says 1000 lbs...

 

[helios]

Just popping in to say how excellent I think the posts are going ATM. I won't be posting just yet, as I think my people might end up being the last non-flood people alive on Makis/os.

 

[Spartan137]

I think Assassin's team has just been evaced, so it should be just you and Friendly...

 

[Assassin716]

yes for clarifications my team is evaced, but i didnt want to blantly spell it out in the story

 

[SGT Razor]

I'm done. My ending kinda left the reader hanging. I know you hate it, but that's it from me until the next RP. By the way, can noobs post in the Halo Universe? My friend is going to join the 405th, but only for the RP.

 

[leegrisham]

I'm done. My ending kinda left the reader hanging. I know you hate it, but that's it from me until the next RP. By the way, can noobs post in the Halo Universe? My friend is going to join the 405th, but only for the RP.

After the thread is started he can.
Anyone can post a reply anywhere.

EDIT:
for clarification was the post where your guys got on the pelican - was that your ending post?
If so that just leaves Helios

 

[SGT Razor]

After the thread is started he can.
Anyone can post a reply anywhere.

EDIT:
for clarification was the post where your guys got on the pelican - was that your ending post?
If so that just leaves Helios

Okay, good.

Yup. That was it.

 

[leegrisham]

OK, well that only leaves assassin and helios to tie off their story lines.
Good luck.

 

[Spartan137]

OK, well that only leaves assassin and helios to tie off their story lines.
Good luck.

Assassin already has. He killed the Floodified SPARTAN, then was pulled in a Pelican and blacked out.

It's just Helios. No pressure, dude!

 

[leegrisham]

You're right I just misinterpreted his last post here.

 

[Assassin716]

remember there is till a few posts left from me to tie this RP into the second one, so some of you might want to post after i make the initial brief post

 

[helios]

Just finished my Story arc. That's about 1440 words right there, that is.

 

[Spartan137]

I'm pretty sure that's everybody.

Ok, whats next?

 

[SGT Razor]

remember there is till a few posts left from me to tie this RP into the second one, so some of you might want to post after i make the initial brief post

 

[Spartan137]

remember there is till a few posts left from me to tie this RP into the second one, so some of you might want to post after i make the initial brief post

I've got nothing.