405th Rp Critique

[Assassin716]

Just A Notice For everyone reading but not actually in the roleplay/community story if you wish to participate put in you characters bio in the possible 405th topic, and you can then enter when you feel is appropriate in the official 405th RP topic, and if you wish to assume a character already in the roleplay but its npc let the person who created the character know and understand first. Itll be funner if a few extra people jump in i noticed Seno joined right in when i gave the opportunity, but things will be heating up soon enough so dont feel discouraged to join!

 

[SGT Razor]

I dissagree with taking the Pride down. Maybe have it crippled to a point. Sabotage? Boarding crafts? Piracy even?

Yeah, piracy sounds good. I vote it's taken over by Covenant Loyalist Pirates.

 

[Assassin716]

spartan137 and i have talked about the pride, it will not be DIA (destroyed in battle), but as to what happens later will be a mystery

 

[SGT Razor]

Ghost ship?

 

[Spartan137]

Suckers. (I've deleted most of this post, 'cause it was a give-away to the story)

For those who saw it, keep it quiet please.

 

[Assassin716]

SHHHHHHHHHH, dont tell them whats going to happen its a secret....oh and helios owns the remains of the UNSC Baneswulf

 

[Primal Weyland]

I have been soooo goddamned busy recently. Not even had a CHANCE to RP here... I'll do my best, but if the Pride has to be KIA, get Primal off onto a LongSword. She'll prolly turn up later.

 

[Spartan137]

I believe Dufraine is supposed to send here over to the Fleet.

Man, that's gonna be a hellofa post you gotta write in the RP thread, lol.

 

[Assassin716]

OMG lol, lets not spoil everything to the readers now, lets start coordinating through pms so as to make the story more enjoyable for the ones that read it

 

[Spartan137]

KK.

All that excluding the ships had already been posted in this, the consideration thread, and the official thread.

 

[leegrisham]

I have been in the hospital this whole week. I will probably out for a few more days. After some thought I think that someone should mod my roles. The easiest way I see to play this is let friendly take control of my ground forces. Since we combined forces to take out the mine. Let my cruiser fall into cloaking while they wait on the elite battle group to arrive. I prefer not to have my two mains (alse and eerie) killed unless I kill them. I'm writing this on my phone and this is completely out of the question for a full rp post.
Thanks hope to hop back in when I'm well

 

[Assassin716]

Ahh man...hope you get well my friend.

 

[SGT Razor]

I have been in the hospital this whole week. I will probably out for a few more days. After some thought I think that someone should mod my roles. The easiest way I see to play this is let friendly take control of my ground forces. Since we combined forces to take out the mine. Let my cruiser fall into cloaking while they wait on the elite battle group to arrive. I prefer not to have my two mains (alse and eerie) killed unless I kill them. I'm writing this on my phone and this is completely out of the question for a full rp post.
Thanks hope to hop back in when I'm well

I refuse to take control of your characters. I'm gonna wait until you get back. I don't write as well as you do. And may I ask why you're in the hospital?

 

[leegrisham]

Monday I had an appendectamy and have been in the hospital ever since I keep having fever at night and they are afraid I have an abses infection.

 

[Assassin716]

we will wait to continue posting,

 

[helios]

The thread's almost dead. Someone's gonna need to defribu-post. I tried earlier, but I got writers block. Damn school, sucked my insperation dry. I'll see what I can do though.

 

[Assassin716]

i was waiting for someone to post again, seems unfair for me to continue posting, so i try to wait for others the story is close to finishing, for some people, but if it helps i continue so we can at least end this story with a ending, as sgt major avery johnson said, "Send Me Out With Bang"

 

[SGT Razor]

Monday I had an appendectamy and have been in the hospital ever since I keep having fever at night and they are afraid I have an abses infection.

Oh, that sucks. Hope you get better.

 

[leegrisham]

Well I made a return post a few days ago, I don't know if anyone noticed.
I am using forum additive on Mozilla so as soon as there is a post made it notifies me. I had to take a two week hiatus and that really stopped some of the story, so I apologize. However we are missing a few posters that we had originally started out with - or at least it seems like to me.
Hopefully this will come back to life, I was having fun.

 

[BlacRoseImmortal]

Yes I did notice your latest post Lee, good stuff. And, again, even though I wasnt taking part in writing I am a dedicated reader and its dissapointing that there has been no progress... I MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!