Halo Fanfic. Not finished.

[GySgt Gonzalez]

@Project003 Yeah but dont you notice the connection that Master Chief had with Kelly in the books... and with Linda... and probably with 15 more spartan girls!! lol, Chief is a PLAYA!!!

That is a VERY true statement.

 

[bulldogresler]

That is a VERY true statement.

i concur. he is very friendly with the ladies

 

[Shadow1336]

If you would like, I would love to help out with the editing!

I would also be able to help you out with editing or atleast proof reading

Sure guys. I'd love to let you proof read it.

PS. I am also thinking of a couple of character types to use for the Project TORPEDO expansion.

I could definitely help out with that. I REALLY want to do this.

 

[Anon ONI agent]

Hey, its a fanfiction, not canon at all. ;D

Correction. All fan fiction is canon to a point.

 

[Walter4]

nice story man keep up the good work love to read yur stuff for ya too! cant wait for ch 2!!!

 

[TheHow7zer]

Feel free to send me the next chapter to funguy_211@hotmail.com for proofreading. BTW, how many chapters do you intend on writing for this?

 

[Shadow1336]

nice story man keep up the good work love to read yur stuff for ya too! cant wait for ch 2!!!

Feel free to send me the next chapter to funguy_211@hotmail.com for proofreading.

Okay. Two more to send it to. Walter, I will need your email address.

BTW, how many chapters do you intend on writing for this?

As many as I can.

 

[Tpp4]

Can't wait to read chapter 2, that was nice. I have been looking for more halo related stories, because i already finished all the other books already published. Good work, keep it up.