thanks for having me in on this. i hope u can give my character a someone important moment. i.e has to choose between two things for a different out come. for example sacrafice himself to save his outfit or make an improvised weapon like his helmet or something. im relli into this. also if ur looking to publish this or whatever i could work up a cover for u.
Helljumpers: Battle For Earth
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Wow...Just wow...FREEKING SWEET!!!
But, I do have a little problem. My character, Furlong, is a bit too cheery if you know what I mean. Hes supposed to be a futuristic Bruce Willis in one of the "Die Hard" movies. He cracks a wise-assed joke here and there.
Remember (I forgot to mention this in my bio), Hes the Great, Great, Great, Great, Great, Great Grandson of Rob Furlong. If you haven't heard of him, look it up on wikipedia, you will see what I mean.
Other then that, the story is great, keep it up!
But, I do have a little problem. My character, Furlong, is a bit too cheery if you know what I mean. Hes supposed to be a futuristic Bruce Willis in one of the "Die Hard" movies. He cracks a wise-assed joke here and there.
Remember (I forgot to mention this in my bio), Hes the Great, Great, Great, Great, Great, Great Grandson of Rob Furlong. If you haven't heard of him, look it up on wikipedia, you will see what I mean.
Other then that, the story is great, keep it up!
My story a fail.Ok maybe it is a little bit of one,but still,i tried my best.My story doesn't go very long each chapter and also that gives you no reason to diss my story.After i helped you and sided with you on that recaster topic,you go and backstab me.Now i feel like not writing anymore of my story because no-one cares a flying F***.Thanks for the encouragement.If there was any.
ACDCrockr209
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I have something cooked up for you my friend. you won't be cheering for long.
Are you saying that to me? Cause I never said that.
I respect other people's work, especiially when it come to writing a story.
I read what you wrote and I liked it. Some will like and some won't that how book are. Maybe someone out there doesn't like the book Halo: Fall of Reach, yet so many do.
Keep writing, I want to see how it ends.
-Pony
ACDCrockr209
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Oh, ok.
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On topic.
I'm sorry to say that i'm not going to be able to work on the next chapter for a couple of days. I have a ton of homework this week, so yeah.
All I can say though, is that there will finnally be some fighting between human and covenant forces!!!
So have the safety off boys.
-Pony
ACDCrockr209
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I know, but, hey, someone has to do it right. Can't wait to read it bro, goo luck!!
[quoteHey ACDCrockr, gotta say, i have this awesome feeling of starting a story myself now. Hm... Gotta brain storm.
Always wanted to write sometthing][/quote]
Go for it bro. Thats how I felt too, though I thought about the story months before I began typing.
But who knows, maybe your story will turn out awsome!!!
I'll see how it will turn out with the mongoose. I'm still thinking about how to put it in the story with out messing it up.
-Pony
ACDCrockr209
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Yeah, I read it. If you want to make a cocer for it, go right ahead.
-Pony
Hey sorry I havent really been on in a few days. Here's my character bio if you still think you can use him. If not it's no biggie, but the story is great so far.
Name: Specialist Jay Swift
Place of Birth: Earth
Weapons: M90 CAWS Shotgun, Battle Rifle
Vehicles: Warthog Gunner
Date Of Birth: October 9th, 2530
Appearance: Brown Hair, Blue Eyes
Build: 5'10'', 190lbs
Specialty: Close Combat, Hand to Hand, Tech Specialist
If you need any more just let me know, Sorry I got back in so late
Name: Specialist Jay Swift
Place of Birth: Earth
Weapons: M90 CAWS Shotgun, Battle Rifle
Vehicles: Warthog Gunner
Date Of Birth: October 9th, 2530
Appearance: Brown Hair, Blue Eyes
Build: 5'10'', 190lbs
Specialty: Close Combat, Hand to Hand, Tech Specialist
If you need any more just let me know, Sorry I got back in so late
ACDCrockr209
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Ok, I will only allow 1 more ODSTs, but you won't be in my squad. You will have yoiur own, but im not going to go to details.
So Jswift is one ODST.Please send me your rank and squad name.
If you want to be an ODST great, just get a bio in adn i'll see where I can put ya with your squad. Please include your rank and squad name please.
I will not accept any more ODSTs, but I will gladly take more marines.
-Pony
So Jswift is one ODST.Please send me your rank and squad name.
no possible chance for one more odst?
If you want to be an ODST great, just get a bio in adn i'll see where I can put ya with your squad. Please include your rank and squad name please.
I will not accept any more ODSTs, but I will gladly take more marines.
-Pony
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